Friday, 29 March 2019

Welcome to my blog

What am I hoping to get out of A2:

  • This year I am hoping to widen my understanding of the media world by learning the key conventions and learning about the music video industry.
  • I am also hoping to gain improved editing and shooting skills.
Initial ideas:

  • One of my ideas was Stay by Post Malone - The song is about him and his girlfriend. They aren't very happy together but they still love each other but they always fight. Post Malone is contemplating leaving her because she doesn't make him happy however is willing to give her a chance as they talk things through while completely sober (because they're almost always under the influence otherwise).  
  • Another idea I had is Go by Ella Eyre - This song is also about her and her boyfriend not being happy together as she says "If I go, Will you love me when I come back".


Saturday, 9 March 2019

PODCAST 9: Rough Cut Updates

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  • We have a full performance cut
    • Full rough cut is based on this with a few changes
    • Still need to make more changes 
  • Competition
    • audience responses still need to be filmed
Rough Cut things to improve:
  1.  Some slo-mo!
  2.  Would've been better to have girl's hair tied back to show emoting
  3.  Lot of shakey shots; lot of out of focus - target especially with layering
  4.  Is there scope for BRIEF diegetic intro and/or intro?
  5.  Lot of takes need brief trimming to reduce elements that diminish verisimilitude
  6.  Every 'drop' needs careful consideration
  7.  Fair bit of vocals not quite synced
  8.  SS' perf + costume is a strength
  9.  Play around with possible colouring/FX to make narrative distinctive too.
  10.  Good eg of where you might layer: 017 has lot of open space, so maybe some of that graveyard scene
  11.  023 good eg of framing that works well for non-greenscreened layer
  12.  032 good eg of take needing slight trimming (from end)
  13.  the 3 'coverage' takes around 042, last works well, prev 2 are random, and don't (think about  hand scraping over wall mural / grafittied wall etc
  14.  stairs/bedroom - see my comments on prev cut; same issues
  15.  this includes ONE jump cut; usually makes more sense to have 2/3 in one sequence
  16.  058 an eg of not really paying full attention to the drop
  17.  always be clear why you're using a take; 114 is just too random
  18.  118 a big audio spike (duplicating audio layer?)
  19.  122 watch out for takes that are too short; this also needs shot variety, eg CU of the eating
  20.  125 look for opportunities to illustrate (Goodwin) lyrics, eg intoxicate me
  • Re-shoots:
    • Performance
      • Burnt down building 
      • Solo performance 
      • Need more variety, especially at the end were car park is too much 
      • Some lyrics bit out of sink need to be reshot 
    • Narrative
      • Add in lead singer at the end
      • changes of costume
      • change argument scene with more close ups and slow mo slaps
      • change whole funeral scene adding in lead singer

Monday, 25 February 2019

ROUGH CUT 1: Full Vid

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Above is the first full rough cut with the narrative and performance combined.

There are no visual effects as of yet but these will be improved.

Edited by CS

What needs to be changed:

  • Colour correction on a few clips
  • 1:00 - 1:09 the background two performers arent playing 
  • shot at 1:21 is too quick
  • 1:50 odd framing with a tree in top left
  • 1:51 CU of push
  • Clip at 2:02 needs to be replaced
  • Stabilization in a few shaky clips
  • Maybe add some greenscreen effect at 3:20
  • Have some greenscreen footage added in narrative in some places
  • Reshoot graveyard scene
    • Avoid shooting the text on them

Tuesday, 12 February 2019

AUDIENCE: Feedback for narrative rushes + performance rough cut

Narrative rushes:
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Feedback:

  • realistic
  • Worked for the audience
  • some shots were blurry
  • didnt really make sense with graveyard
  • liked the table scene although lighting was bad
  • good continuity
  • shot of TV was shaky 
  • lighting was different for different shots
  • last take at the end was too long and shaky 
  • story makes little sense


Performance rough cut:
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Feedback:

  • sometimes takes were too long 
  • costume was realistic
  • facepaint was weird
  • different shots had different lighting 
  • more enthusiasm for bassist
  • ELS was cool when they switched postition
  • costumes were good
  • singer's singing was convincing
  • liked the overlaying of the singer on top of the drumming
  • some shots of the guitar solo was a bit off
  • some syncing of singing shots were off


PODCAST 8: Updates since last podcast

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Shoot 6: Narrative

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EXTRA TEXT TO BE ADDED

Monday, 4 February 2019

VIRAL COMPETITION: Script

- What's up guys, its Sam from Welshly Arms and Ive got exciting news for y'all! We are gonna host a competition on TIK TOK where you can all enter. All you have to do to enter is make a TIK TOK using our song 'Locked' from our upcoming album and hashtag 'lockedonyou'. We will be watching all of them and the winner is gonna come up and join us and show off your rad skills whether that be drumming, strumming or singing. However don't be sad if you don't make 1st place because we have prizes for the top 2 runners up which is gonna be a signed copy of the limited edition digipak and for two 2 3rd places get a discount code for our merch in our store.

Production Schedule Updates

Shoots:
Re-shoot Performance: 20th January
JC - Photos for album cover: 20th January
Add to narrative: 21st - 27th

Conventions (genre): 8th February  
  • SS - 6,7,8,9 (UGC, Alt-Vids, distribution/ social, Promo package)
  • CS - 2,5, 10 (cinematography, editing, genre specifics, possible influences)
  • JC - 1,3,4 (lyrics/visual, intertextuality, representation)

Industry research: 1st February 
  • JC - what is indie, how does it work?
  • CS - History of digitisation and the impact then clear summary
  • SS - Monetisation + record label

Audience research: 1st February 
  • CS - questionnaire summary
  • JC - Media appearances
  • SS - Audience feedback sample scene
  • SS - Mood-board male
  • CS - Mood-board female

Editing:
  • Performance rough cut: 28th January 
  • Narrative:
  • Final Cut: 

Digipak: 
  • SS - Merch: 29th January
  • CS - Website: 29th January 
  • JC - CD cover: 29th January

    Other:
    • SS - Storyboard: 18th January

    EVAL Questions:
    • Q1 Conventions/representations
      • Planning - 12th February
      • Finished - 25th February 
    • Q2 Promo package branding
      • Planning - 12th February
      • Finished - 25th February 
    • Q3 Audience engagement/distribution
      • Planning - 12th February
      • Finished - 25th February 
    • Q4 Technologies
      • Planning - 12th February
      • Finished - 25th February 

    This weekend;
    Narrative filming - sunday 
    Performance rough cut
    Digipak rough
    Merch
    Website rough