Tuesday, 12 February 2019

AUDIENCE: Feedback for narrative rushes + performance rough cut

Narrative rushes:
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Feedback:

  • realistic
  • Worked for the audience
  • some shots were blurry
  • didnt really make sense with graveyard
  • liked the table scene although lighting was bad
  • good continuity
  • shot of TV was shaky 
  • lighting was different for different shots
  • last take at the end was too long and shaky 
  • story makes little sense


Performance rough cut:
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Feedback:

  • sometimes takes were too long 
  • costume was realistic
  • facepaint was weird
  • different shots had different lighting 
  • more enthusiasm for bassist
  • ELS was cool when they switched postition
  • costumes were good
  • singer's singing was convincing
  • liked the overlaying of the singer on top of the drumming
  • some shots of the guitar solo was a bit off
  • some syncing of singing shots were off


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