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Things to improve:
- Abandoned building shots a bit too shaky
- Lip syncing off in various different places (takes away from verisimilitude)
- Have the final shot last for 2 more seconds to anchor who it is properly and let people gasp
- Maybe add in dietetic footsteps and wind noise + birds? (diegetic outro)
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